on shame | Teen Ink
  1. Home
  2. Poetry
  3. Free Verse
  4. on shame

on shame

August 22, 2013
By migwam ELITE, Tumwater, Washington
More by this author
migwam ELITE, Tumwater, Washington
240 articles 20 photos 151 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never let the future disturb you. You will meet it, if you have to, with the same weapons of reason which today arm you against the present." --Marcus Aurelius

View profile

rain, rain, say you'll stay
gone like gold since yesterday
you keep away the shame

freezing grace, amazing gains
be the water in my veins
the lightning in my brain

rain, rain, weigh the pain
of finding august nights to blame
to keep away the shame

yeah, you keep away the shame

© Terrin C., Humboldt, IA

Post a comment
Submit your own

Similar Articles

Previous Next
Poetry
One Piece... One Destiny
By Matt Groy GOLD
Park City, Utah
Matt Groy GOLD, Park City, Utah
11 articles 0 photos 0 comments
View profile
Poetry
Sing it Out Loud
By Poe_poe SILVER
DeMotte, Indiana
Poe_poe SILVER, DeMotte, Indiana
7 articles 0 photos 0 comments
View profile
Poetry
you see me
By XxUnforgivenLovexX SILVER
Des Moines, Iowa
XxUnforgivenLovexX SILVER, Des Moines, Iowa
6 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
to be or not to be that is the question

View profile
Poetry
I thought I knew you
By traveler03 GOLD
San Juan, Texas
traveler03 GOLD, San Juan, Texas
14 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
Living is nothing. Dreaming is something.

View profile
Poetry
Diffrences
By Son`ador SILVER
Hamilton, Other
Son`ador SILVER, Hamilton, Other
8 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;We all mess up sometimes,but if we make a conscious effort to do good more times than not, we&#039;ll be doing life right.&quot;<br /> Stephanie Perry Moore<br /> <br /> Life sucks, and then you die!!<br /> -Anonymous-

View profile
Poetry
Grandfather
By Anonymous

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 3 comments.

Mckay ELITE said...
on Aug. 30 2013 at 4:54 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
146 articles 0 photos 2230 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do.&quot;<br /> &mdash;Apple&rsquo;s &ldquo;Think Different&rdquo; commercial, 1997<br /> &ldquo;Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn&#039;t understood.&rdquo; <br /> ― Weihui Zhou

View profile
*takes a bow* Yes, I'm clever, I suppose. hahaha
migwam ELITE said...
on Aug. 30 2013 at 12:32 pm
migwam ELITE, Tumwater, Washington
240 articles 20 photos 151 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Never let the future disturb you. You will meet it, if you have to, with the same weapons of reason which today arm you against the present.&quot; --Marcus Aurelius

View profile
Ahhh, I see what you did, there, you clever thing, you.
Mckay ELITE said...
on Aug. 28 2013 at 7:58 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
146 articles 0 photos 2230 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do.&quot;<br /> &mdash;Apple&rsquo;s &ldquo;Think Different&rdquo; commercial, 1997<br /> &ldquo;Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn&#039;t understood.&rdquo; <br /> ― Weihui Zhou

View profile
I hate it when you just want to release yourself of the past. But you can't. There's always something retaining that shame you want to discard. And it makes life so much harder to live because you're carrying that excessive and needless weight, because you're afraid of the criticism of other people, unless you're stone-cold and don't give a f*ck about what other people say about you. I like that you added a sort of playfulness to this poem, which is serious in its theme, with the repition of rain. Shame that lingers or is retained by our surroundings is no good. Liberating yourself of it renews your self. And eases Life just a little bit more. It makes it "a little more bearable".