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I want sound to come out of the sky
and light me up
from the inside
tear me up
turn me inside out
I want the thunderclap to come
and light me up
from the inside
burn me up
till I'm outside of myself

yeah, let this storm come
like a storm comes
and leave me all brand new




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MckayThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 27 at 5:12 pm:
Well, that make two of us. I love the feeling of wanting to be new. Like a re-birth. Stellar imagery and emotion. You're being your impeccalbe self in this poem. Congrats on one more Editors' Choice! 
 
MckayThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 27 at 5:13 pm :
*impeccable
 
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romero2016 said...
Aug. 26 at 12:31 pm:
Very nice 
 
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