Words Unheard

Familiar hands grasped mine
Familiar lips brushed mine
Words whispered in my ears
Words unheard
My ears strained
The words disappeared
Familiar eyes searched in mine
Familiar voice serenaded with mine
Words screamed in my ear
Words that told me
His love was a lie





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Rayynbow said...
Sept. 13, 2013 at 8:40 pm
This is really good! I like how your "ears strained" and then right after that "words screamed" at you. It gets across how entirely surprising to you the breakup was.
 
Carly_Elizabeth replied...
Sept. 15, 2013 at 1:34 pm
Thanks. Glad you liked it!
 
love_writing said...
Sept. 5, 2013 at 4:43 pm
Wow, this a really touching poem!  Writing is always a good way to let out my anger or emotions and I really liked it.  Super sorry about your boyfriend though!
 
Carly_Elizabeth replied...
Sept. 6, 2013 at 12:00 am
That's alright it was his loss haha. Thanks for reading!
 
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