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Glass Doll

August 7, 2013
By Kyrstin GOLD, Lacey, Washington
Kyrstin GOLD, Lacey, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"to the world you may be one, but to one you may be the world."


I am a glass doll,
Breaking every second.
There goes a finger,
A foot,
A heart.



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Kyrstin GOLD said...
on Apr. 4 2014 at 12:42 pm
Kyrstin GOLD, Lacey, Washington
17 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"to the world you may be one, but to one you may be the world."

thanks for the advise (:

east_of_ada said...
on Oct. 17 2013 at 10:52 pm
east_of_ada, Null, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"As for me, I am a watercolor. I wash off." (via Anne Sexton,"For My Lover, Returning To His Wife")

"I think I made you up inside my head.'' (via Sylvia Plath, "Mad Girl's Love Song")

"You called it cosmic; I thought it was icy." (via Ada Coen)

i did enjoy the first two lines of this piece, but the last two sort of threw me off because they didn't continue the rhythmn of the poem. with a poem this short you want to keep the sounds concise and similar as to not throw the reader off like i was~it's a great concept, just needs a bit of stylistic revision~ada