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If Only
August 13, 2013
If only you could see how amazing you were.
If only I could see what she was hiding from everyone.
If only someone could have convinced you that life was worth living.
If only I could take back every word I didn't mean.
If only you knew how many people cared.
If only I had taken your words seriously.
If only I hadn't relized to late.
If only you where still here.
If only you hadn't gone away.
If only I said don't do it.
If only I said I care.
© Rebecca S., Marblehead, MA
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Poetrylover_1 SILVER said...
on Aug. 14 2013 at 12:59 pm
The structure of this poem is great. But in my opinion you shouldnt have used if only on every line. Other than that, it was amazing i felt it, because we as people sometimes dont hink that people care. People caring about you is very important no matter how much you say it doeant. continue to inspire others through your writing <3.
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