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The world is crumbling-slowly but still 
And We are 
The ones that kill

This sounds foolish
I understand 
But does it make since
For us to fight

What is the meaning of war 
We murder 
We kill
What do we all do it for
 
Please I beg you 
 its not too late 
We could change are ways 
Could turn back now 
..Run away from this haze

We could stop it
All of it

if we Really tried 
If we Gave it our everything
Maybe we could all strive

We could live in harmony 
Unity 
We could live as One 
We could just forget the past

And Even though none of this would happen fast
We could attempt to be happy
We could try to make it last

And  with All of us together 
We could focus on things 
Bigger 
And
Better



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S.S.SplattersThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sept. 6, 2013 at 10:30 pm:
Amazing just breath taking I was speakless the first time I read it.  You have a gift with writing and all your pieces hit hard with me.  I olve how you dont preach like a hippe but still promote world peace and give it its' poetic justice.  This is an awesome piece and I hope there will be many more to come as amzing as this one you can only rise to be greater from here.  Great work and well done!
 
maelstrom14 replied...
Sept. 7, 2013 at 10:49 am :
Wow thank you for saying this and for all of the other comments, yeah I didn't really want to sound hippie :) thank you so much it means a lot
 
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