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Flames on the water,
The drive of my desire,
Ashes floating to the ground
Ice intertwined with fire...

Strands of the sun
Licking at the night sky,
Your face wreathed in smoke
Mine painted in a fever,
Passion and restraint
Ever waging war on each other.

Depend on this
That I will not fall
I shall rather float up,
As heat tends to rise
And fire am I.

Love is merely a disguise,
A clever facade
Cloaking the truth
With smiles and sunshine,
Rather than conveying
The reality.
Truth is,
We do not love.
We are merely ridden
With wants to fulfill.
We do not admit it,
But it is a Pleasure to Burn.



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Cat-GirlThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 28, 2013 at 9:39 pm:
The wording of this is extraordinary. I love this poem! They really SHOULD publish this in the mag. Nice job!!!!!! :3
 
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Natasha_Nat said...
Aug. 16, 2013 at 6:07 pm:
This was SOOO good. I loved it from start to finish...good job. Keep working :)
 
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Callie.I.AmThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 12, 2013 at 5:59 pm:
THIS IS SO AWESOOOOOOME. Seriously. I loved the whole idea of it, the way it was written. This should be in the magazine. :S 5/5 stars :)
 
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