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The Fire

How can I explain this feeling?
This burning sensation,
Destroying me from the inside-out,
Fire,
Flaming bits and pieces of sanity,
This jealousy taking over,
How can I pretend it's nothing?
This raging desire,
Driving me out of my mind,
Fire,
Sparks exploding from every direction,
This jealousy consuming me,
How can I live without knowing?
This true feeling of love,
Eating me alive,
Fire,
Smoke slowly entering my lungs,
This jealousy finally ending it all.



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Truth_and_Love said...
Aug. 14, 2013 at 8:02 pm
Beautiful and true poem. I like this a lot. It touches on something I think about often. Beautiful piece, girl. Keep up the good writing! 
 
CatchAFallingStar replied...
Aug. 15, 2013 at 12:46 pm
Thanks for the feedback, I really appreciate it :)
 
cestro said...
Aug. 2, 2013 at 12:06 am
Good use of words and pauses - great job. Really interesting.
 
Joyfulpeace said...
Aug. 2, 2013 at 12:04 am
This is excellent. I recently just ended a relationship due to no trust! this is amazing and alot of people can relate!
 
SamanthaW replied...
Aug. 2, 2013 at 11:24 am
Thank you both for your feedback. I wrote this because I wasn't trusting my boyfriend when he was around a girl that he has had a crush on for three years. But I realized that a relationship cannot last without complete and total trust in the other person. Anyway, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks again :)
 
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