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Still Blue

The translucent ocean
matches the blue of your eyes
I remember a time
where life passed us by

A time so far away, now
I can't remember the feel of your touch,
or how
I remembered the still blue of your eyes

They captivated my very being
your still blue eyes
Even without me seeing
you for so long

Even now the tingle of
flesh on flesh
Still brings on hot flashes
of cold regrets

Your still blue eyes
are nomore
for they don't
captivate me anymore



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hatefulgirl said...
today at 1:59 am:
the thought of it is very nice ... 
 
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Lovessunlight said...
today at 12:25 am:
make sure to double check your work It's great otherwise and you can use punctuation in poetry if you want, some might help it read more smoothly
 
Beaniebaby123 replied...
today at 6:13 pm :
Thanks for the feedback
 
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