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Breakups Suck

By , Collierville, TN
So many times forever is cut short,
And we distract ourselves with friends or sports,
She who once proclaimed her love,
Leaves as easily as a fleeting dove,
And your left wondering if she was even real,
So we chain up our hearts and no longer feel,
We slap on a smile and ignore our bad luck,
Breakups Suck.




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KamanaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
today at 10:15 pm:
I can relate. Sometimes the pain just never seems to want to go away but I promise it will.  Just keep writing until it does, that's what always helps me.
 
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BelieveInLoveAtFirstSightThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
today at 9:03 pm:
I think it was very good and it basically what sums eveything up about heartbreaks..
 
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BrokenAngel121 said...
today at 10:03 am:
Short and painful.. but life goes on.. Hope u heal fast and the poem was amazing :)
 
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Lovessunlight said...
yesterday at 11:43 pm:
I swear all women aren't this way I really like the poem but I wish you would have described more of what you dreamed or wanted about forever
 
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