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Everyday,Everynight it's who I think about,
You make me smile all the time and make me laugh aloud.
You are my heart and my soul,
You are my Santa who lives in the north pole.

You put on a smile,
As big as the river Nile.
Even if mom says 'no',
You never make me feel low

On the moon , you would take me in my dream,
And the moon would be made of vanilla and cream.
You are my idol and my inspiration,
I Thank god for making this wonderful creation.

It's your day ,
It's my love of bay,
Only for you,
Dad I love you!!!



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Thatdaydreamer This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 25, 2013 at 3:00 pm:
this is lovely! and you must be very proud of your dad, he sounds like a brilliant father:)
 
-namaste- replied...
Jul. 25, 2013 at 5:56 pm :
Thnx... N yes I am n his is toooo....
 
FallenoutofgraceThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Aug. 2, 2013 at 10:18 am :
This is nice and beutiful, i like it even more becuase its personal its about your dad
 
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Mr.DedicatedDetermination said...
Jul. 24, 2013 at 10:52 pm:
Ahh what great sentiment. The diction you used was great for the tone of the poem. Light and fluffy like that vanilla ice cream you talked about :P Great job! And thank your dad for me! I'm sure he's a wonderful man.
 
Shoana replied...
Jul. 24, 2013 at 11:10 pm :
Wow.... Thank u !!! Ur comment made my day!
 
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