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My Dad , My World

July 23, 2013
By -namaste- BRONZE, Brampton, Other
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-namaste- BRONZE, Brampton, Other
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Favorite Quote:
All dreams are dreamt to be true,
Because the sun sets to shine in the morning.













- SeiraBlyton

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Everyday,Everynight it's who I think about,
You make me smile all the time and make me laugh aloud.
You are my heart and my soul,
You are my Santa who lives in the north pole.

You put on a smile,
As big as the river Nile.
Even if mom says 'no',
You never make me feel low

On the moon , you would take me in my dream,
And the moon would be made of vanilla and cream.
You are my idol and my inspiration,
I Thank god for making this wonderful creation.

It's your day ,
It's my love of bay,
Only for you,
Dad I love you!!!

© Lukas D., Conway, AR

The author's comments:
My dad is in the armed forces, I see him only for a few months in a year.
So this is something dedicated to him and a tribute to him.
Daddy i love you.
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Fallen_ PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 2 2013 at 10:18 am
Fallen_ PLATINUM, Quakertown, Pennsylvania
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" a shattered world is only an opening into a new beginning with laughs, smiles, and love all around enter the world of the light and away from the broken darkness"

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This is nice and beutiful, i like it even more becuase its personal its about your dad
-namaste- BRONZE said...
on Jul. 25 2013 at 5:56 pm
-namaste- BRONZE, Brampton, Other
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Favorite Quote:
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Because the sun sets to shine in the morning.













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Thnx... N yes I am n his is toooo....
Thatdaydreamer GOLD said...
on Jul. 25 2013 at 3:00 pm
Thatdaydreamer GOLD, Peterborough, Other
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this is lovely! and you must be very proud of your dad, he sounds like a brilliant father:)
-namaste- BRONZE said...
on Jul. 24 2013 at 11:10 pm
-namaste- BRONZE, Brampton, Other
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Wow.... Thank u !!! Ur comment made my day!
AcidRoses SILVER said...
on Jul. 24 2013 at 10:52 pm
AcidRoses SILVER, Elmont, New York
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Ahh what great sentiment. The diction you used was great for the tone of the poem. Light and fluffy like that vanilla ice cream you talked about :P Great job! And thank your dad for me! I'm sure he's a wonderful man.