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A traitorous mind

July 19, 2013
By Meliz PLATINUM, Handforth, Other
Meliz PLATINUM, Handforth, Other
20 articles 2 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
One second you can conquer the world and suddenly you have never felt so low
When you're surrounded by all these people, it can be even lonelier than when you're by yourself.

Oh mind, listen
I am inconsolable
As I stand here, withering
And the rocks start to shake

Oh body, straighten
Even if I go, be dignified
Will I now belong to the devil?
Whose is it to determine me - myself?

Oh smile, plastered
The sea is calling me now
Temptation is there, be just
As I start to fall, I cough up mud
And I realize I'm underground.

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on Nov. 24 2013 at 3:19 pm
Pargaran SILVER, New Glasgow, Other
6 articles 3 photos 123 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be who you are, and say what you feel. Because those who mind don't matter, and those who matter don't mind."
-Dr. Seuss

That was so deep... It's about suicide, correct? Nice twist at the end, I wasn't expecting it at all! Very well written, keep up the good work!

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