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A traitorous mind

July 19, 2013
By Meliz PLATINUM, Handforth, Other
Meliz PLATINUM, Handforth, Other
20 articles 2 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
One second you can conquer the world and suddenly you have never felt so low
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When you're surrounded by all these people, it can be even lonelier than when you're by yourself.


Oh mind, listen
I am inconsolable
As I stand here, withering
And the rocks start to shake

Oh body, straighten
Even if I go, be dignified
Will I now belong to the devil?
Whose is it to determine me - myself?

Oh smile, plastered
The sea is calling me now
Temptation is there, be just
As I start to fall, I cough up mud
And I realize I'm underground.



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on Nov. 24 2013 at 3:19 pm
Pargaran SILVER, New Glasgow, Other
6 articles 3 photos 123 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be who you are, and say what you feel. Because those who mind don't matter, and those who matter don't mind."
-Dr. Seuss

That was so deep... It's about suicide, correct? Nice twist at the end, I wasn't expecting it at all! Very well written, keep up the good work!


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