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Love Counts

July 17, 2013
By caseymarie SILVER, Connellsville, Pennsylvania
caseymarie SILVER, Connellsville, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Curiosity often gets you into trouble.


You're the only one that I see
You don't need me to prove it
I don't have to page you 143
Before, that's how we would do it

I still remember when we were five
jumping rope and picking up sticks
our heaven was making mud pies
and then we ate bags of trail mix

now your on the vine leading to my balcony
it's ten at night and I knew you'd come around
he leavened and said he loved me
I knew our love would count


The author's comments:
If you look closely, in each line i put a number (or a word that rhymes with the number) counting straight up to eleven. Do you see it?

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