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The Storm

July 12, 2013
By Jay-Wolf PLATINUM, Cedar Hills, Utah
Jay-Wolf PLATINUM, Cedar Hills, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"The man who takes offense when offence is not intended is a fool
However the man who takes offence when it is intended is an even greater fool"
Ralph Waldo Emerson


You look up to see a storm coming down the hall





A sense of cold fury follows behind





All that raw power carried by the wind




It was the darkness of a world drowned in sin

A decade of pressure in a bottle ready to release, yet unwilling to unwind
Ready to strike, ready to drown the world in tears, most of all ready to watch the world fall


The author's comments:
I was inspired by the darker side of me, and almost every other person I know.

All of our dark sides seem very similar...

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on Aug. 31 2013 at 12:23 pm
Jay-Wolf PLATINUM, Cedar Hills, Utah
25 articles 0 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The man who takes offense when offence is not intended is a fool
However the man who takes offence when it is intended is an even greater fool"
Ralph Waldo Emerson

Dude thanks it means a lot to me to have someone acualy go through my poems and give feedback i have a bunch of new stuff always coming in so just keep an i out for my work thanks!        

on Aug. 9 2013 at 8:17 pm
brandon_1997 BRONZE, Vernon, Other
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I really enjoyed this poem, I read all your work but this was by far my favorite :)


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