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A Rainy Day

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The school was off late
and as I stepped out
could feel the Showers of Blessings
falling from heaven above;
which increased in volume
by each passing minute
and it made me wait
for the cab for long
but couldn’t find any
And so
I called upon my coachman
to bring the auto
till a nearby cafe
where I sipped coffee
which allowed me
to enjoy the Rain.



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CarrieElizabethThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
yesterday at 5:48 pm:
I LOVE the continuous breath method of poetry as aformentioned in My Mother at Sixty-Six. You used it well, and it flowed effortlessly. I also loved the way you capitalized certain words as to make them appear proper nouns instead of improper. Well done. :)
 
sago2212 replied...
today at 12:42 am :
thanku so much for ur motivation *SMILES*
 
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