A Rainy Day

June 28, 2013
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The school was off late
and as I stepped out
could feel the Showers of Blessings
falling from heaven above;
which increased in volume
by each passing minute
and it made me wait
for the cab for long
but couldn’t find any
And so
I called upon my coachman
to bring the auto
till a nearby cafe
where I sipped coffee
which allowed me
to enjoy the Rain.

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CarrieElizabeth said...
Jul. 12, 2013 at 5:48 pm
I LOVE the continuous breath method of poetry as aformentioned in My Mother at Sixty-Six. You used it well, and it flowed effortlessly. I also loved the way you capitalized certain words as to make them appear proper nouns instead of improper. Well done. :)
sago2212 replied...
Jul. 13, 2013 at 12:42 am
thanku so much for ur motivation *SMILES*
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