The Messenger

July 8, 2013
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Thoughts, words, ideas;

Twisting around my mind. 
Yearning to break free;

To be written on paper.
The pen is my wand;

Plucking phrases from the bottomless void
I am the messenger;

The words my Ariadne. 
Help me on my journey;

And let the words break free. 

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anonymous3327 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 18, 2015 at 6:07 pm
I understand what you mean by not finding the right words. Many times I will tell someone about a story idea and they want me to write it out, but when I try, nothing feels right about it. It's not until I give up on writing the story that the words seem to burst forth and I have to write them down. It's almost as though it's not my story to tell, but something else's that is just using me to pen it. So it's not until I stop trying so hard that it begins to flow.
Popcornjazz said...
Jul. 13, 2014 at 3:50 pm
i like the words and the flow of the poem the crativity is good
Sierra_Reigns said...
Jul. 1, 2014 at 10:13 pm
I appreciate how it is short but honest. One can get so much from it. 
sophistryxo This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 31, 2013 at 11:13 am
Wow. This is excellent. It evokes great imagery and I do love your phrasing :) keep up the great work!
Cat-Girl replied...
Nov. 10, 2013 at 4:03 pm
I totally agree!!!! This is wonderful writing! I have the same problem; stories bang around my mind all the time. Nice job! :3
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