Thinking of you

July 3, 2013
By Lyssajean SILVER, Fort Lee, New Jersey
Lyssajean SILVER, Fort Lee, New Jersey
5 articles 1 photo 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
And if your still up at 4 a.m, you're either in love or lonely and I don't know which one is worse.


Think of me when no ones around,
think of me when your down.

Think of me when you lost your way,
think of me and all our days.

Think of me while you dream,
reality isn't as far as it seems.

Think of me when your lost,
I'll come find you,
a train,
a taxi,
no matter what the cost.

Think of me in your days of doubt,
let those sad thoughts fade out.

If you ever miss me,
know i miss you too.
Your in my mind,
I'm thinking of you.


The author's comments:
I wrote this for the boy im in love with.
I have never wrote poetry to anyone before!
he inspired me.
I love you.

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on Sep. 14 2013 at 9:41 am
Lyssajean SILVER, Fort Lee, New Jersey
5 articles 1 photo 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
And if your still up at 4 a.m, you're either in love or lonely and I don't know which one is worse.

Thank you so much!

on Jul. 9 2013 at 1:53 am
AdrianaMartinez SILVER, Goose Creek, South Carolina
7 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
Carpe Diem .

The central idea of this poem is very cute, but to make the poem even better, I think you should proof read your piece and correct the grammatical errors. I really do like your poem, but it would flow more nicely if the reader doesn't have to decipher what it is you're trying to say. Also, congratulations on your first piece of poetry; my first poem was no way near as good.


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