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Balloon

Can you drown
a balloon?
Or will it shove
it’s way back
up and
gasp
(the air
it holds already)



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OldYoungOne said...
Aug. 12, 2013 at 12:52 pm
Pretty little poem :) That's all I can say at this point.
 
StarlitSunriseThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 14, 2013 at 5:04 pm
Thank you!
 
Mimo7197 said...
Aug. 10, 2013 at 2:20 pm
Really nice! Keep writing!
 
StarlitSunriseThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 14, 2013 at 5:06 pm
Thanks! :)
 
DawnieRaeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 20, 2013 at 6:29 pm
That is a nice little poem! I liked it -C
 
StarlitSunriseThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 21, 2013 at 1:20 pm
Thanks so much! That means a lot. :)
 
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