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I seek you

July 1, 2013
By Meliz PLATINUM, Handforth, Other
Meliz PLATINUM, Handforth, Other
20 articles 2 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
One second you can conquer the world and suddenly you have never felt so low
When you're surrounded by all these people, it can be even lonelier than when you're by yourself.

I am told what I am
A painter, no more
One who colours the world
With the madness of Thor

I am told what to do
It is advise that I seek
Yet I feel I'm not myself
My transformation - incomplete

I yearn for your words
Of wisdom, so true
But I feel that it hurts
All I want to know is who?

What must I do
To figure out my life
For everything I know
Is all lost in strife

As for now I must sit and wait
And hope for the best
That my life will gather pace
And my treasonous thoughts - rest

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on Nov. 24 2013 at 3:24 pm
Pargaran SILVER, New Glasgow, Other
6 articles 3 photos 123 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be who you are, and say what you feel. Because those who mind don't matter, and those who matter don't mind."
-Dr. Seuss

I like how you used Thor as an image of madness. Very well done!

on Nov. 24 2013 at 1:54 pm
The flow of the poem is clever. I like it. Beautifully written. I look forward to more of your work. The beginning is most unique. Your finish is intressante.

on Nov. 23 2013 at 1:15 pm
elycavill SILVER, Samobor, Other
5 articles 0 photos 186 comments

Favorite Quote:
Leave nothing but footprints,
Take nothing but pictures,
Kill nothing but time.

Hi. I like ur poem. I like the formation, how you kept it flow.But I especially the beginig it seems really strong! :)

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