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I seek you

July 1, 2013
By Meliz PLATINUM, Handforth, Other
Meliz PLATINUM, Handforth, Other
20 articles 2 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
One second you can conquer the world and suddenly you have never felt so low
.
When you're surrounded by all these people, it can be even lonelier than when you're by yourself.


I am told what I am
A painter, no more
One who colours the world
With the madness of Thor

I am told what to do
It is advise that I seek
Yet I feel I'm not myself
My transformation - incomplete

I yearn for your words
Of wisdom, so true
But I feel that it hurts
All I want to know is who?

What must I do
To figure out my life
For everything I know
Is all lost in strife

As for now I must sit and wait
And hope for the best
That my life will gather pace
And my treasonous thoughts - rest



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on Nov. 24 2013 at 3:24 pm
Pargaran SILVER, New Glasgow, Other
6 articles 3 photos 123 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be who you are, and say what you feel. Because those who mind don't matter, and those who matter don't mind."
-Dr. Seuss

I like how you used Thor as an image of madness. Very well done!

on Nov. 24 2013 at 1:54 pm
The flow of the poem is clever. I like it. Beautifully written. I look forward to more of your work. The beginning is most unique. Your finish is intressante.

on Nov. 23 2013 at 1:15 pm
elycavill SILVER, Samobor, Other
5 articles 0 photos 186 comments

Favorite Quote:
Leave nothing but footprints,
Take nothing but pictures,
Kill nothing but time.

Hi. I like ur poem. I like the formation, how you kept it flow.But I especially the beginig it seems really strong! :)


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