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brown MAG

June 27, 2013
By meghaagarwal BRONZE, Los Altos, California
meghaagarwal BRONZE, Los Altos, California
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it's strange because i never liked the color
brown, but as i gaze into your eyes, i can't help but fall irrevocably
in love with the creamy, smooth, rich color
of mocha coffee, and i hesitate in
turning away
from you, because i don't know
if i can function completely without
the caffeine that is your eyes



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antonia said...
on Jul. 5 2013 at 1:48 pm
i loved it. 

kqwright5 said...
on Jul. 5 2013 at 1:27 pm
This poem is absolutely amazing. I can relate to it and the sentence structure really captures the quick and choppy thoughts that someone in love would really be thinking in. 100% outstanding. 

on Jul. 5 2013 at 12:56 pm
Amazing <3

Rowan11 said...
on Jul. 5 2013 at 12:53 pm
I'm not usually a fan of poetry, but I really enjoyed this. It's well structured and reads easy, I love the caffeine concept, very interesting. Great poem!