June 28, 2013
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Summer, I love that word
And all the memories it brings to mind
The lovely days not yet blurred
By time

Summer is a break from everything
No school till fall
And many sunny days,
I love it all

Summer, so golden and sweet
It means so much to me
And at the end I feel complete
I feel so fancy free

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Magik1234 said...
Dec. 20, 2013 at 8:10 pm
I love the rhytmn and the way this poem flows. You should submit more poems.
DawnieRae replied...
Jan. 11, 2014 at 3:17 pm
Sorry i couldn't get back to you sooner! Thank you! every comment means so much! 
RoyalCorona said...
Sept. 27, 2013 at 5:52 pm
This poem was nicely written and has a sort of rthymn to it that floats through the words! Great job!
DawnieRae replied...
Sept. 30, 2013 at 12:17 pm
thank you soo much! I'm so glad other peope like my work! 
Mckay This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 27, 2013 at 3:49 pm
I like the style of it. And how you express what qualities make this season so enjoyable for you. Nicely written.
DawnieRae replied...
Aug. 28, 2013 at 4:02 pm
Thank you McKay! I really enjoy reading everyones feedback! 
Krasota-Butterflies-and-Angels This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 22, 2013 at 5:55 pm
Great job! Simplistic and elegant :D Keep on writing!
DawnieRae replied...
Aug. 22, 2013 at 6:28 pm
Thanks sooooooo much!! That means a lot! Have a nice day!!
TheEpic95 said...
Aug. 17, 2013 at 4:25 pm
Ha! This is a good one! I like the unique lenths of the lines. For some weird reason, I can only rhyme when in meter, but the rhythem these lines have are closer to the way a person talks. It feels human. Plus, I LOVE the subject of summer and memories. Rockin' job, Dawnie!
DawnieRae replied...
Aug. 17, 2013 at 9:00 pm
Thank you soo much! I love reading what other people think of my work. It really encourages me to write more.
freeperson said...
Jul. 28, 2013 at 11:39 am
i think this is very cool. i'd like to look at my poem goodbye if u dont mind :)    
DawnieRae replied...
Jul. 30, 2013 at 6:18 am
Thanks! I will definetly be reading your poem!!
ItsallboutMEThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 23, 2013 at 6:32 pm
I loove summer too, and this poem most definitely out a meaning to summer, great job!
DawnieRae replied...
Jul. 24, 2013 at 5:40 pm
Thanks I am glad you liked it!!!! :) :)
Carly_Elizabeth said...
Jul. 21, 2013 at 5:26 pm
I liked the words you used to describe summer, "golden and sweet." And the ryming too. My favorite was, "lovely days not yet blurred by time." It is a perfect description of summer. Keep writing more!
DawnieRae replied...
Jul. 22, 2013 at 7:23 am
Thank you! I will keep on writing!
StarlitSunrise This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 21, 2013 at 1:28 pm
I really like this poem. :) It is so happy and carefree, which totally reminds me of summer! ^.^
DawnieRae replied...
Jul. 22, 2013 at 7:24 am
Thank you so much!
Quartermaster This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 21, 2013 at 12:14 am
Your poem really captures the spirit of summer. I especially liked your line"the lovely days not yet blurred by time". I think you should add a metaphor or simile. 
DawnieRae replied...
Jul. 21, 2013 at 6:47 am
thank you so much! I will make sure i read your articles too. 
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