Summer

June 28, 2013
By DawnieRae BRONZE, Lancaster, Ohio
DawnieRae BRONZE, Lancaster, Ohio
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Summer

Summer, I love that word
And all the memories it brings to mind
The lovely days not yet blurred
By time

Summer is a break from everything
No school till fall
And many sunny days,
I love it all

Summer, so golden and sweet
It means so much to me
And at the end I feel complete
I feel so fancy free


The author's comments:
I wrote this poem because i love summer, and i want everyone to know just how much it means to me.

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on Jan. 11 2014 at 3:17 pm
DawnieRae BRONZE, Lancaster, Ohio
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Sorry i couldn't get back to you sooner! Thank you! every comment means so much! 

on Dec. 20 2013 at 8:10 pm
Magik1234 SILVER, Omaha, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
"You are braver than you believe, stronger than you seem and smarter than you think." ~Christopher Robin (Winnie the Pooh)

I love the rhytmn and the way this poem flows. You should submit more poems.

on Sep. 30 2013 at 12:17 pm
DawnieRae BRONZE, Lancaster, Ohio
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thank you soo much! I'm so glad other peope like my work! 

on Sep. 27 2013 at 5:52 pm
RoyalCorona SILVER, Grand Rapids, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
All of us fave failed to match our dream of perfection. I rate us on the basis of our splendid failure to do the impossible. -William Faulkner

This poem was nicely written and has a sort of rthymn to it that floats through the words! Great job!

on Aug. 28 2013 at 4:02 pm
DawnieRae BRONZE, Lancaster, Ohio
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Thank you McKay! I really enjoy reading everyones feedback! 

Mckay ELITE said...
on Aug. 27 2013 at 3:49 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do."
—Apple’s “Think Different” commercial, 1997
“Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn't understood.”
― Weihui Zhou

I like the style of it. And how you express what qualities make this season so enjoyable for you. Nicely written.

on Aug. 22 2013 at 6:28 pm
DawnieRae BRONZE, Lancaster, Ohio
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Thanks sooooooo much!! That means a lot! Have a nice day!!

on Aug. 22 2013 at 5:55 pm
Carpe-Caffeam GOLD, No Where, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
“If it weren’t for the coffee, I’d have no identifiable personality whatsoever.” –David Letterman

Great job! Simplistic and elegant :D Keep on writing!

on Aug. 17 2013 at 9:00 pm
DawnieRae BRONZE, Lancaster, Ohio
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Thank you soo much! I love reading what other people think of my work. It really encourages me to write more.

on Aug. 17 2013 at 4:25 pm
Helena_Noel BRONZE, Burnt Hills, New York
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Favorite Quote:
“I'd rather see a sermon than hear one any day; I'd rather one should walk with me than merely tell the way: The eye's a better pupil and more willing than the ear, fine counsel is confusing, but example's always clear.” -Edgar Guest

Ha! This is a good one! I like the unique lenths of the lines. For some weird reason, I can only rhyme when in meter, but the rhythem these lines have are closer to the way a person talks. It feels human. Plus, I LOVE the subject of summer and memories. Rockin' job, Dawnie!

on Jul. 30 2013 at 6:18 am
DawnieRae BRONZE, Lancaster, Ohio
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Thanks! I will definetly be reading your poem!!

on Jul. 28 2013 at 11:39 am
freeperson DIAMOND, Burlington, Vermont
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Favorite Quote:
"Have you seen the way he looks at you, the way his expression softens and his eyes are like stars...?" - Ara Weston

i think this is very cool. i'd like to look at my poem goodbye if u dont mind :)    

on Jul. 24 2013 at 5:40 pm
DawnieRae BRONZE, Lancaster, Ohio
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Thanks I am glad you liked it!!!! :) :)

on Jul. 23 2013 at 6:32 pm
Angel1932 PLATINUM, Antioch, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Love can touch us one time and last for a lifetime" ~ Celine Dion
"If you're going to pray don't worry... if you're going to worry don't pray." ~ Mariah Carey

I loove summer too, and this poem most definitely out a meaning to summer, great job!

on Jul. 22 2013 at 7:24 am
DawnieRae BRONZE, Lancaster, Ohio
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Thank you so much!

on Jul. 22 2013 at 7:23 am
DawnieRae BRONZE, Lancaster, Ohio
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Thank you! I will keep on writing!

on Jul. 21 2013 at 5:26 pm
Carly_Elizabeth PLATINUM, Othello, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"And above all, watch with glittering eyes the whole world around you because the greatest secrets are always hidden in the most unlikely places. Those who don't believe in magic will never find it."
Roald Dahl

I liked the words you used to describe summer, "golden and sweet." And the ryming too. My favorite was, "lovely days not yet blurred by time." It is a perfect description of summer. Keep writing more!

on Jul. 21 2013 at 1:28 pm
StarlitSunrise DIAMOND, Clemmons, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"Blessed are they who see beautiful things in humble places where other people see nothing." ~Camille Pissarro

I really like this poem. :) It is so happy and carefree, which totally reminds me of summer! ^.^

sarah98 BRONZE said...
on Jul. 21 2013 at 9:22 am
sarah98 BRONZE, Holyoke, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
It is better to write for yourself and have no audience than write for your audience and have no self.

Of course! And just keep writing stuff like this and the comments and ratings will just keep piling up!!

on Jul. 21 2013 at 6:47 am
DawnieRae BRONZE, Lancaster, Ohio
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thank you so much! I will make sure i read your articles too. 


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