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My Sweet Revenge

June 6, 2013
By Zeeny PLATINUM, Staten Island, New York
Zeeny PLATINUM, Staten Island, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"When someone truly cares about you, they make an effort not an excuse"


What a mind I have
Plotting out my revenge
Sneaky, slimy, & sweet
Yet gruesome at the same time
Should I choose a weapon?
Or words? What if motivation?
Like a cobra, I will strike
And coil, and choke and devour
The wonderful taste of revenge
Like a baby crying for milk
I will cry for revenge
And dance for joy
And steal his lovers heart
Like a lunatic
I shall bash the heart
Into a million pieces
Unable to mend
Like a tiger ripping and tearing
I will savor the blood
And cherish the flesh
The spicy taste of satisfaction
My gruesome revenge
Lies in my hands


The author's comments:
This poem came to mind when I read a story online called Masquerade Ball. The narrator wanted revenge

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Zeeny PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 25 2013 at 4:00 pm
Zeeny PLATINUM, Staten Island, New York
37 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"When someone truly cares about you, they make an effort not an excuse"

Thank you so much. Your awesome for commenting on this poem. 

on Jun. 25 2013 at 3:56 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
“If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you've still got a soul left to lose”
― Charles Bukowski

Creepy. Dark. Awesome xD