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It's so hard to say

June 8, 2013
By dragongirl GOLD, Woodbridge,, Virginia
dragongirl GOLD, Woodbridge,, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
No matter what happens to us know that I will always be there for you. Remember who you are as a person and no one can take that away from you.


It’s so hard to say I love you, I care for you, and I miss you even though you don’t.
It’s so hard to say those words that cause pain to you
Those words that hurt like hell to say
It’s so hard to say I hate you, I wish you were gone, I want you to leave, but in truth I want you to stay.
It’s so hard to say goodbye, when I really want to say hello
All those words I wanted to say I can’t
All those times when we fought and said hurtful things to each other
It’s so hard to ask forgiveness, when you won’t let me.
It’s so hard to say I’m sorry when I’m really not.
All those kinds words you once said are gone
It’s so hard to say we are friends well in fact we not
It’s so hard to say I’m strong, but I’m not
Everything that was said was said
It’s so hard to say I’m here, but in truth I’m not
It’s so hard to say this is me when people kept pull me down
It’s so hard to say this is the end but in fact it the beginning
It’s so hard to say anything



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HazelGrace said...
on Jun. 16 2013 at 3:35 pm
I like the idea and your use of repetion is good, but maybe could use a little more refinement and less usage for a bigger impact. The poem feels a little listy, so I would suggest picking on of these ideas (it's so hard to say.... ) and expand. Or make the connecttion between all of these things more clear. That will make your poem sound less like youre checking things off and list. Overall, nice job and stay clear of overused phrases and cliches :)