People Person

June 13, 2013
By MissAdele PLATINUM, Tacoma, Washington
MissAdele PLATINUM, Tacoma, Washington
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"Did you like the show?"
He asked me, grinning
It was a simple question really,
But for some small, insignificant reason
It made me feel so out of season

I told myself
"It's only a question, you can do this, be calm,
be calm and collected."

I fixed my hair
I sucked in a breath
I swallowed fast and...

Nodded my head

But, no.
I was prepared,
I had a speech
I'd tried so hard to make him see
That I could speak,
That I was real
That I could talk and think and feel

But instead,
I fixed my hair
Sucked in a breath
Swallowed fast and
Nodded my head



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on Jun. 27 2013 at 6:51 pm
MissAdele PLATINUM, Tacoma, Washington
40 articles 4 photos 5 comments
Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it!

on Jun. 16 2013 at 10:59 am
WrenArrington, Sioux Falls, South Dakota
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I really like how you managed to put a lot of meaning into a pretty short poem. The repetition of the third stanza drove the meaning home and kind of summarized the whole poem. Five stars :)


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