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I knew a ginger who wanted the world,
Hair so fine and bright.
From the beginning he wanted a sweet revenge,
Something soaring in his delight.

At first it was a simple thought,
Made into a plan.
His only task for survival,
Gave him a high demand.

I knew a ginger who wanted the world,
Hair so fine and bright.
From the beginning he wanted a simple revenge,
Something soaring in his delight.

When he tried, he failed and cried.
Not knowing the problem,
Or the task at hand.
But tried again he must and failed.

I knew a ginger who wanted the world,
Hair so fine and bright.
From the beginning he wanted a simple revenge,
Something soaring in his delight.

But known of that happened,
And here we are,
Laughing at his pain.

But it's alright,
Because I knew a ginger who wanted the world.



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LilaChason said...
Jun. 13, 2013 at 6:32 pm
It's almost like a song (forgive my dumbness) with the repeating verse
 
22much4me replied...
Jun. 14, 2013 at 3:53 pm
Not at all a dumb comment :) all poetry is somewhat translated to songs. Or I should say all songs are translated to poetry :P
 
Dancergirl224 said...
Jun. 13, 2013 at 6:14 pm
When I first glanced over it, I thought it was good and it reminded me of someone who means a lot to me. But when I re-read the poem and i thought about every word and tried to imagine it, I truly think thast this is an amazing piece of work.
 
22much4me replied...
Jun. 14, 2013 at 3:55 pm
Thank you so much for such a positive feedback :) I never thought that this poem would have got so much positive feedback :)
 
McDevitt said...
Jun. 13, 2013 at 12:50 pm
When the author kept repeating the line ''I knew a ginger who wanted the world'' i thought it ment that he/she knew somebody that wanted something real bad. The''Ginger'' wouldn't stop trying to get his/her goal. I think that that person is very persictent and smart. I think the true message here is never stop trying for your goals and anything is possible.
 
Dancergirl224 replied...
Jun. 13, 2013 at 6:09 pm
I agree with that :)
 
22much4me replied...
Jun. 14, 2013 at 3:54 pm
I'm glad you thought of it like that and enjoyed the poem as much as my partner and I wrote it :)
 
sadesdd said...
Jun. 12, 2013 at 9:14 pm
I like it, the repeating lines are so cool.
 
22much4me replied...
Jun. 13, 2013 at 6:38 am
Thank you so much :)
 
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