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rhyming poems
are written by youth,
so innocent and naive,
when things made sense
and every word
had other words?(except orange of course)
that went hand in hand.

then one day,
life happened.
we hardly noticed
as our problems,
stopped having answers
and everything
turned orange,
when we woke up
and decided
rhyming was lame.



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The_Introvert said...
today at 4:07 pm:
This is a really excellent metaphor. Keep up the good work!  
 
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LiaBeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 12 at 3:53 pm:
Poems are about expressing ones view of the world in a shortened, but beautifully written way. This poem showed a strong viewpoint. Even if it didn't rhyme. 
 
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S.S.SplattersThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 11 at 7:40 pm:
Well, we are teens so we are still in our youth and rhyming poems are still awesome if you ask me.
 
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