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Clear.
i see Everything so clearly.
Everything is too Real, too Crisp,
too much.
no daydreams.
no fantasies.
only What is here.
Everything front of me - Irrefutable.
This is my Achilles Heel,
my Killing Fault,
my Torture.
Too Realistic.

Blurry.
i see everything so blurry.
everything is too Fuzzy, too Unsettling,
too soft.
many Daydreams.
many Fantasies.
Nothing is really here.
everything in front of me - Unrecognizable.
This is my Achilles Heel,
my Killing Fault,
my Torture.
Too Nonsensicle.

Vague.
i see eVerything so vaguely.
eVerything is too Dim, too Hazy.
too little.
foggy dAydreams.
foggy fAntasies.
sOme of what is here.
eVerything in front of me - Faded.
This is my Achilles Heel,
my Killing Fault,
my Torture,
Too Tenebrous.



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Jade.I.AmThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 10, 2013 at 10:34 pm:
I really like this, very thought provoking :)
 
kyramcn replied...
Jun. 10, 2013 at 10:39 pm :
thank you :)
 
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