too (adj)

June 2, 2013
By kmcn33 BRONZE, Needham, Massachusetts
kmcn33 BRONZE, Needham, Massachusetts
4 articles 3 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
I was much too far out all my life / And not waving but drowning


Clear.
i see Everything so clearly.
Everything is too Real, too Crisp,
too much.
no daydreams.
no fantasies.
only What is here.
Everything front of me - Irrefutable.
This is my Achilles Heel,
my Killing Fault,
my Torture.
Too Realistic.

Blurry.
i see everything so blurry.
everything is too Fuzzy, too Unsettling,
too soft.
many Daydreams.
many Fantasies.
Nothing is really here.
everything in front of me - Unrecognizable.
This is my Achilles Heel,
my Killing Fault,
my Torture.
Too Nonsensicle.

Vague.
i see eVerything so vaguely.
eVerything is too Dim, too Hazy.
too little.
foggy dAydreams.
foggy fAntasies.
sOme of what is here.
eVerything in front of me - Faded.
This is my Achilles Heel,
my Killing Fault,
my Torture,
Too Tenebrous.


The author's comments:
please not the capitalization

it depicts a certain topic, but you can decide what that is for yourself

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kmcn33 BRONZE said...
on Jun. 10 2013 at 10:39 pm
kmcn33 BRONZE, Needham, Massachusetts
4 articles 3 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
I was much too far out all my life / And not waving but drowning

thank you :)

on Jun. 10 2013 at 10:34 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1163 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you've still got a soul left to lose”
― Charles Bukowski

I really like this, very thought provoking :)


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