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The Love I'd Always Been Missing

I don't want to wake up every day
And know you're still gone
I don't wanna see you're away
Need your touch I've been missing so long

I don't know if you're coming back and I don't know when
Don't know if I should be dwelling on my past
Because you might not be coming back in the end
Wish I could've made our love last

Not one article of your clothing in the house
Not one reminder of you lying around
It's like you've disappeared without a trace
Been a while, can't picture your face

If you come back to me
Eventually somewhere down the road
Will you too see all the things we used to be?
All the things we'd known?

But now when I wake up every day
A new face is there
Smiling back at me
Meaning so much more to me, because they actually care

And hand in hand with interlocked fingers, walking in sync
I'm glad to say I've finally found the love I'd always been missing



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vartikasinghThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 22, 2013 at 2:21 am:
u really rock buddy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
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Valery5This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 19, 2013 at 8:29 pm:
AAAWWWEEEEE!!! I FREAKING LOVE IT IT'S GREAT !!!!  for a sec i thought it was about me lolBUT SERIOUSLY IT WAS GREAT 
 
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ShagunThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 18, 2013 at 10:17 am:
the feelings are very raw and true. You got talent, girl. You just need to develop it. I agree, you need to work of the flow and rhythm of it but you'r good. An remember, you don't need a guy to make you feel worthwhile. :D  
 
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LiraDaeris said...
Jun. 12, 2013 at 12:38 am:
I would mostly work on the rhythm. The meter seems unbalanced across the lines, but I liked some of the descriptions.
 
BrittanyLuvEveryone replied...
Jun. 12, 2013 at 1:18 am :
thank you so much :)
 
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