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A Monster Lurks

May 29, 2013
By BrittanyNicole103 SILVER, Ash Grove, Missouri
BrittanyNicole103 SILVER, Ash Grove, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"Life's not about waiting for the storm to pass, it's about learning to dance in the rain."


A monster lurks
Whispering in my ear
Encouraging every doubt
And feeding every fear
He blocks everything else
Until he is all I hear

A monster lurks
Whispering such horrid lie
His voice so very alluring
His tongue so very sly
Drowning me in misery
And I can't even cry

A monster lurks
A whispering moan
"Why would anyone care
if you were all alone?"
"Stop it, stop it" I say
And made my heart of stone

A monster lurks
Whispers poison my mind
Looking for the way out
But he is all I can find
His noxious gas keeps me
So alone and so confined

A monster lurks
Whispering in terrible glee
Even as hard as I try
I can't seem to break free
Funny how I am so controlled
By a being I can't even see

A monster lurks
I can feel him there
I know I can't win
He's not playing fair
My mind, his fortress
My fears, his lairs

A monster lurks
Both day and night
He keeps me disarmed
So I can't even fight
Filling my sight with darkness
I can't see the light

A monster lurk
His identity remains a mystery
A monster lurks
Using only deceit and trickery
A monster lurks
Battling for the final victory


The author's comments:
Everyone has that little voice telling them that they're not enough, that they can't or simply pulling them down.

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itsana GOLD said...
on Jun. 3 2013 at 7:41 pm
itsana GOLD, Plano, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"best way to save humanity is to turn the monsters against one another"~neil shusterman

Loved it. Simple as that(:

JennaArian02 said...
on Jun. 3 2013 at 5:53 pm
JennaArian02, Pagosa Springs, Colorado
0 articles 7 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
And we are different minds, working off the same brain. Passengers on different cars, are stepping off the same train. In the end, making it right is the main aim. Different parts of the picture, highlight the same frame. - Jurassic5

This is so amazing....it really got to me...thank you

on Jun. 3 2013 at 3:43 am
LittleLadybird GOLD, Carrickfergus, Other
14 articles 0 photos 48 comments

Favorite Quote:
To be nobody but yourself in a world that is trying it's hardest every night and day to change you into everyone else is to fight the hardest battle a human being can fight, and never stop fighting.

Great poem! :) you described the little voice/monster so well, and your rhyme works really well too :) the repetition of the firs tline is really effective. if you have the time, could u maybe check out some of my work and tell me what you think? Keep writing! :)