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The golden floor
Remains interred
In evanescent flour,
Which, like wispy clouds,
Will sway
When rustled by
A mother’s heel.
Chairs like sacred mountaintops
Surround the island’s shores
And slide across the vast expanse
When prodded by
A mother’s hip.
On placemats caked with sugar crystals,
Crispy crumbs, and syrup swamps,
The cookbook sports a recipe
That’s often viewed,
Yet unfulfilled,
At mercy of
A mother’s care.
A spoon that oozes gooey dough
Rockets like tornados’ winds
Around the bowl when jolted by
The twirling of
A mother’s hand.
Beeping shatters peaceful air,
And soon the son is sighing
As silky chocolate coats his tongue
And rushes down his throat,
The products of,
And children to,
A mother’s gentle touch.
The pungent scent of cinnamon
Wavers through the night,
When drifting from
The portal to
Caresses of
A mother’s kitchen.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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brynniboooThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 19, 2011 at 4:28 pm:
This is great! wonderful imagery! I can picture it perfectly! Check out and rate some of my poems! Thanks and great job!
 
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Swanson said...
Apr. 6, 2011 at 12:14 pm:
I liked this poem beacuse it reminded me of my mother when she is in the kitchen ncooking and it is one of my favorite memories
 
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GoldSageThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 24, 2011 at 10:12 pm:
This seems so true to my grandma's house. It's almost like my mom or grandma or my aunt are never out of the kitchen.
 
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Danica said...
Jul. 23, 2010 at 2:20 pm:
Wow!  Haha, I don't even know what else to say.  This was just incredible, my favorite I've read so far.  Your imagery is really beautiful :)
 
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bbygurl21 said...
Jul. 5, 2010 at 2:31 pm:
i love this poem so much :)♥♥♥<3
 
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sonnysulouffThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 6, 2010 at 2:43 pm:
Great job! So descriptive, and I love the metaphors! :)
 
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shaber said...
Dec. 22, 2008 at 11:03 am:
xcellent .go ahead with er work buddy
 
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tweedle dee said...
Dec. 5, 2008 at 2:12 pm:
wow i like this its great... reminds me of my mom and my grandma too!
 
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JJ500 said...
Dec. 5, 2008 at 5:29 pm:
That poem really put a detailed picture in my head! AMAZING!!!
 
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SillyIndigoSea said...
Dec. 5, 2008 at 7:30 pm:
Well written. Lot's of good sense use and descriptions.
Not every Mom is like that though.
 
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rewritemistakes said...
Dec. 6, 2008 at 4:25 am:
This is really touching. The consistent metaphors and similes that are brought into it throughout develop an amazing imagery.
 
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yum said...
Dec. 6, 2008 at 1:14 am:
good
 
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