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Parenthesis

May 21, 2013
By dinks PLATINUM, Hinsdale, Illinois
dinks PLATINUM, Hinsdale, Illinois
28 articles 0 photos 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
"and kisses are a better faith than freedom"


You used to ask me why i was (sad)
and I used to reply with half hearted smiles
and I’m fines
but I listened to empty (songs)
with pretty lyrics
that you used to tell me
(remind)ed you of the place we first met
and I pretended that you were
falling apart without (me)
but like always I was
head over heels,
stuck in a s(of)t, translucent world
with only fading memories
of (you)



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dinks PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 18 2013 at 6:31 pm
dinks PLATINUM, Hinsdale, Illinois
28 articles 0 photos 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
"and kisses are a better faith than freedom"

Thank you!

on Nov. 18 2013 at 12:23 am
MissExploration BRONZE, Vancouver, Washington
1 article 0 photos 112 comments

Favorite Quote:
It Can Only Fly When It Needs To.

I love your use of parenthesis, especially because it has a meaning in it when you put the words together. 


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