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A Broken Door

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Your eyes show demise
From those you despise.
Blood tears fall from your heartbroken eyes
I know it's no lie, you don't want to say good-bye.

For you open the broken door
I don't want to scream anymore.
Deep down in my core
Blood sits at my slit wrists ready to pour.

I fall in the darkness of the abyss
Satan smiles as I do this.
I still remember our very first kiss
It's those times I dearly miss.

Drowning under the tears I have cried for you
I want to undo.
I fell in yours arms, and just knew
My feelings only grew.

It is only you I deeply desire,
For you I aspire.
My secret admire,
While sitting close to the fire.

This feeling for you is taking hold of
All I have ever known, my love.
You’re my angel, my strength, my dove
You are most important even in darkness you come above.

I love you with all my heart,
Even from the very start.
I can’t stand to be apart
From you, you are my good part

You’re the one thing that I like about me
If I am lost at sea, you will be
The key
There to unlock me

Your presence
Is essential essence
What a wonderful pleasance?
Quite a fine balance

You are the one I love deeply so
With all my soul.
You complete me and make me whole,
Take me and make me yours once more…



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LexusMarieThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
today at 3:35 pm:
Hey there! I like the concept here and I thought that this was very different from most love poems.. you went a very, very dark route with this, it feels very evil almost. It was gory! And the ending is a bit lighter. And the picture lightens the mood a tad. I felt like the rhymes were super repetitive.. like, in the first one each one was an 'i' sound. And the second was 'or'. Which is fine, because it's your poem.. I just like to see some diversity in rhymes. I try to ... (more »)
 
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Metal4LifeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
yesterday at 10:47 am:
Please rate, comment,and enjoy! i need criticial critizism!
 
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