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does he feel the same way as i do?

I look at him and get lost in his brown eyes

His brown hair hangs in his eyes
i lose my breath as he smiles

i blush as i see the twinkle in his eyes

Does he feel the same way i do

i ask as i look at him and wonder
i realize he is a good person
a good guy who cares to much and gets hurt because he care so much

i can see his scars

and they are just like mine

does he feel the same as i do

how can i ask him

should i ask my friends to ask him

should i just do it myself

and i tell him

i like you

and he says

i like you too

so he does feel the same way i do

and i wish i had told him earlier than when i did

so

does he feel the same way i do ???

yes he does

and it takes me to another
time and place

with no pain
and just
love
without getting hurt



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TheCometThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 27 at 8:18 pm
Finally a beautiful happy poem :D I like it a lot. I like the Dialogue use it gave your poem a special touch ^_^ Keep ot up dear. Thanks a loy for sharing this
 
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