Report Abuse Home > Poetry > Free Verse > The Storm The Storm By Laugh-it-Out, Brooklyn, New York, NY More by this author pirouette down from a clouded stage and deep in the wings, the sun is waiting « Previous article More by this author Next article » October & November Join the Discussion This article has 9 comments. Post your own! Report abuse Tabitha1233 said... today at 8:38 pm: WOW! I love it! Report abuse Mckay said... Jun. 24 at 5:27 pm: I cannot believe I haven't read this before. I love LOVE LOVE the imagery here. I'm watching Cosmic Love while reading this. And OMG. IT GOES SO WELL WITH THIS. Especially when Florence is dancing in front of the mirror, and like a 10000 Florences are behind. And I love the non-capitalization. I envision 1000000000 ballet dancers. So beautiful. Mckay replied... Jun. 24 at 5:30 pm : Specturm also works with all the ballet dancers. Report abuse ephemeral said... May 27 at 2:17 am: It's funny how you chaacterized a storm in such a way that one wouldn' typicall describe it. Moreover, your focus on the sun and waiting for the end of the storm affects this piece's meaning which I personally like considering your approach to this. While short, it's simplisitc beauty is commendable, and being able to achieve greatness in so few lines is impressive. Why this works is due to your metaphor, and all the things that the mind can imagine and connect to and connotate w... (more ») Report abuse steffles said... May 25 at 12:30 pm: Wow...just wow. I don't even have words to describe it. Report abuse SaphiraBrightscales said... May 25 at 6:29 am: Wow Liv! I love how you phrased this one,, It is truly beautiful when it comes to the word choice. And Oh my the first line: " A thousand tiny dancers" Nobody could have described raindrops so sweetly :)) And the last line had such a lasting impact...as if this poem is gonna be stuck in my head for long...I think i'll jot it down somewhere too so I can show it to other people. I loved it. Report abuse Cutey-Beauty said... May 24 at 11:24 pm: Beautiful imagery-I immediatly thought of ballet or modern dance, idk why haha. The little ballerina droplets floating down to earth, with the sun right behind them. :) Amazing job! Report abuse OldYoungOne said... May 24 at 11:42 am: Enjpyed the fact that someone else likes the rain as I do. Love the comapsrison and the imagery. I can't necessarily knack that but I love it none the less Report abuse Court901 said... May 22 at 2:05 pm: Really nice imagry. It is really short though, maybe you could lengthen the poem and add some more descriptions? I enjoyed it though.