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In the shadows,
Something creeps,
Something mystic,
dark, and deep.

The flicker of my flashlight,
The shadows shrinking back.
A roving beam of light,
Revealing... "Wait? What's that?"





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thisisascreenname This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 21, 2013 at 2:42 pm
Simply awesome. Love it.   
 
LexusMarie said...
May 26, 2013 at 10:54 pm
Hey there! I really, truly LOVE this. This has to be my favorite poem of yours. I love the title, picture, and concept. They all go so well together! This was just written so beautifully and the rhymes were right on, perfect. I could go on and on about this, but I won't because I can't put into words my love for this poem. THIS IS AMAZING.
 
estucker1998 replied...
May 27, 2013 at 8:33 pm
Thank you! By the way, I have a new poem up called "Paper Places" if you want to read it! 
 
Chichot123 said...
May 22, 2013 at 10:42 am
Wow, I love this poem. I really enjoyed what you did with the near rhyme. You are really talented write on :D. Btw could you please read, rate and comment on my haikus "The Nearing Summer" and "Photograoh"? Thank you :) 
 
estucker1998 replied...
May 22, 2013 at 4:57 pm
Thanks! And I would love to see your stuff! 
 
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