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Time stops

If time could stand still, I’d freeze it here,
So I’d always be in his arms
In his arms, where I’m meant to be,
Filled with the perfect love he’s given me.

When im around you nothing is wrong
To know you’re the one; my ‘Mr. Right’.
A blessing sent from up above,
In you I’ve found my one true love.

This is the time for me
To show you.
We will have two important things
Eternal love and happiness.



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Chichot123This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
today at 10:47 am:
Sweet, beautiful, short and simple. I love it :D 
 
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SunballSunnyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 18 at 6:29 pm:
made me want to cry i luv it
 
Kittycatdancer15This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 18 at 7:07 pm :
awwww thanks <3
 
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alone.15.forever said...
May 15 at 10:24 pm:
This was a very well written poem keep up the great work!!!!!!!!!!  
 
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Ali101This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 15 at 10:21 pm:
this is great ! I love it
 
Kittycatdancer15This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 15 at 10:43 pm :
thank you so much.
 
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