Baptism for a Deaf Child

April 30, 2013
The boy was deaf
was he ready?
the hardship
on an even tougher path
What will I give?
he is not alone
on the path
hands on his head
the promise of community
the promise of an easier path

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RoyalCorona said...
May 30, 2013 at 11:47 pm
It wasn't bad but I would like it if you would lengthen it a bit and add more details so I could feel a connection  to the character more deeply. I believe that it could become a greater poem if you did that and show more feelings in the main character. Nice job other than that. 
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