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Colors streaking across the sky,
A big arc of orange and pink and purple,
Ascending across the darkness with pride.
Rotating and weaving through stars,
The light comes quickly,
The colors cutting the blackness,
And fading into a light light blue.


The sun falling in slow motion,
The bottom nearing the horizon.
The blue blanket we call sky,
Getting ready to desert us.
An orange flame catches in the horizon,
An enferno lighting the earth on fire,
Spreading across the line of trees,
Orange and red burning bright between the branches,
Last glimpses of the sun,
Leaving the earth aflame to run.
The burning soon subsides,
Leaving ashes in the sky.



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lordfarquad said...
Feb. 17 at 8:58 pm:
LEL HA GAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
 
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CANTCORNERDORNER said...
Feb. 17 at 8:53 pm:
LEL HA GAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
 
MissLizzieGirlThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 18 at 6:44 pm :
Be positive!!!!!!!!!!!
 
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EmmettHerculeLaFave said...
May 13, 2013 at 12:00 am:
Excellent imagery here! I'm not good at that. Haha 5/5.
 
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raymondpaulThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 12, 2013 at 11:58 pm:
I LOVE THIS ONE ALSO!!!!!
 
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