Ice and Sun

May 2, 2013
By ANoOneWithAVoice GOLD, Peach Bottom, Pennsylvania
ANoOneWithAVoice GOLD, Peach Bottom, Pennsylvania
15 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's kind of fun to do the impossible." - Walt Disney


Part one
Ice in his veins,
Stone of a heart.
No love of the world,
As he rides in his cart.
Why does he hate
This world that surrounds?
Does he save up his malice
To unleash on the town?
Alone in his house
He sits, does he weep?
What kind of pain
His company keeps?
I’ll ne’er understand
The man made of stone,
He’ll never understand me.

Part two
Noodles for brains,
Too soft a heart.
He smiles at me
as I pass in my cart.
Why does he love
This world that surrounds?
Does he save up his madness
To unleash on the town?
In his too crowded house
He sits with his friends.
Never does he worry
How he’s going to meet ends!
Does he not care
How much money he gives?
Poor as a pauper,
That’s how he lives.
I’ll ne’er understand
The fool made of gold.
He‘ll never understand me.


The author's comments:
I tried to tell a story from two perspectives, I'm not sure how well I did, but it's just a first attempt

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on May. 20 2013 at 5:51 pm
ANoOneWithAVoice GOLD, Peach Bottom, Pennsylvania
15 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's kind of fun to do the impossible." - Walt Disney

thanks, it's not my favorite, but I'm pleased with it. It means a lot to me that you bothered to comment - thankyou so much!

on May. 17 2013 at 2:02 am
daniellemarie13 GOLD, Escondido, California
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Favorite Quote:
“When you’re a kid, they tell you it’s all… Grow up, get a job, get married, get a house, have a kid, and that’s it. But the truth is, the world is so much stranger than that. It’s so much darker. And so much madder. And so much better.” ~ Doctor Who

This is really good :) I like the idea of two sides of the same story.


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