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Identity

I have lost who Iam I
can not think
From a straight path to a narrow road my mind draws a blank
Who am I really in my mind I can not see
I want to get back to who I am now
To who I used to be
One day I will find,One day I will see
A way to gain the real me
I need a cure A strange remedy to figure out who I am,
My true Identity



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PotterWhoLocked said...
May 13, 2013 at 12:27 pm
I love the line "I need a cure a strange remedy." Really nice. Good job.
 
Jade.I.AmThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 13, 2013 at 12:24 pm
Very good, if simple. I think you could really expand....but really, I liked it!!! :D
 
Night_Star replied...
May 13, 2013 at 12:29 pm
Thanxs :)  
 
IrenieThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 5, 2013 at 4:08 am
Good job. I liked it. It almost sounded almost like a song :)
 
TheDarkSideOfMeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 5, 2013 at 12:32 am
Dude this i feel all the time this is so me !!! -sunny-
 
Night_Star replied...
May 5, 2013 at 12:35 am
Thanks!!!!!!!!! be sure to look at more of the poetry on my page please !!! :)
 
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