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May 1, 2013
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Tea
Leaves
Crinkled
Crushed, and scattered
All over this blue-rimmed saucer
Resemble my crumbling heart,
Cracking like glass—
Broken…
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DawnieRae said...
Aug. 27, 2013 at 8:27 am
This poem is so sad, i cant describe it exactly. Anyways as always wonderful work Mckay! 
 
Mckay This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 27, 2013 at 3:20 pm
It is sad, but I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thank you!
 
SaphiraBrightscales This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 29, 2013 at 5:06 am
What happened???
 
Mckay This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jun. 4, 2013 at 2:40 pm
As in how? Saphira?
 
SaphiraBrightscales This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jun. 13, 2013 at 2:34 am
The crumbling heart?? I loved the poem though,,, so vivid...
 
Mckay This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 2, 2013 at 3:42 pm
You know how it can be sometimes. The heart crumbles and in the end it gathers it pieces and fixes them. 
 
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