Lifeless Life

April 30, 2013
By YonnaLovess BRONZE, Washington, District Of Columbia
YonnaLovess BRONZE, Washington, District Of Columbia
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Favorite Quote:
Life Is What You Make It

Whats the point of living, when you always shed tears. Always hearing lies. Thinking that you are loved. Dreaming of what you want, But in reality you don't. Just so much pain. Looking down at the rain. Lifeless life. Whats the point, There no life when you have an empty heart. Especially if your heart is torn apart. Lifeless life. It isn't easy hearing rumors spread about you of so many lies. Hiding the pain. Just wanna show that you are strong. But enough is enough. You are who you are lifeless life or not. Just love yourself and everything will be okay.

The author's comments:
This poem i created is sorta of my life.. and its to who ever feeling their life is over. Its not.. Continue doing what you do. Let the haters hate :)

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Zach_M said...
on May. 14 2013 at 5:18 pm
okay, when you write poetry what you should do is elabroate using metaphorical language!! it will make your poems really stand out!! This would have been really really good if you would have added emotion and texture within the description of your diction. Great job though, because I do so potential.


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