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Midnight Sorrow

My eyes bled from the tears I shed and my heart began to frey
i got on my knees asking someone please would they take the pain away
Like a train of its tracks my life went ariy
I sit in the dark praying that angel would hear my cry
I wish that i could heal my midnight sorrow
and hope that everything would be diffrent buy tomorrow

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IrenieThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
today at 2:27 am:
I loved the description "my eyes bled" but you don't spell "awry" "ariy" Otherwise good job. This is probably my favorite of yours :)
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