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I want to hold your hand
It's gentle curves so delicate
But strong and rigid
You grace the visage of my palm

Your hand makes me feel wanted
It Makes me feel warm
It Makes me feel protected
It helps me weather the storm

Our spirits can dance out our fingertips
Glossy memories dance through our palms
Our lives can intertwine
Weaving together on Love's loom

It's just two hands though
Mindless interlocking of fingers
Seemingly meaningless
The comfort of your hand lingers

Just to hold your hand
For a second, a minute, an hour
I'd give the world for it
This action has the most divine pow'r




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Deej6595This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
today at 10:29 pm:
This is very good. I like the meaning of it. There is a bit of hopeless romatic in all of us. I think.
 
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Melenium said...
May 3 at 12:01 am:
great poem!
 
cmalcolm replied...
May 3 at 5:46 pm :
Thanks! It means alot that people care to comment. :)
 
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JustADreamerGirlThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 2 at 10:12 pm:
I love this! If you guys could come check out my poem and rate it, that would be great. Thanks!
 
cmalcolm replied...
May 2 at 11:12 pm :
For sure!!!
 
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FlickeringFlare said...
May 2 at 6:09 pm:
Wow, this is really good. I understand what you are saying. The deeper meaning of holding hands, the content feeling. Really strong.
 
cmalcolm replied...
May 2 at 8:08 pm :
I know right! It's just sooo... soothing, and comforting, it's hard to explain. :)
 
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dragonsandthreeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 2 at 1:21 pm:
Amazing imagery, and great meaning.
 
cmalcolm replied...
May 2 at 1:28 pm :
Thank you so much! :)
 
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kailasulli said...
May 2 at 10:39 am:
This creates a beautiful imagery and I love the little rhyming parts!  :) 
 
cmalcolm replied...
May 2 at 10:53 am :
Thanks! It means so much!
 
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