April 26, 2013
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Hate is dark black.
It tastes like coal.
It smells like smoke.
And reminds me of death.
It sounds like a little girl screaming.
Hate makes me feel sick.

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Rolledthestone This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 13, 2014 at 12:20 pm
It seems you have a thing for 5W poems. Not a critisim just observing. I like that. Keeping things simple. As a suggestion I might say that especially on sites like these, you want a more intriguing title. Even if your poem is short and simple, the title can add so much to a poem. My opinion. Do with it what you will.
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