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Dark Beauty

April 17, 2013
By Zeeny PLATINUM, Staten Island, New York
Zeeny PLATINUM, Staten Island, New York
37 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"When someone truly cares about you, they make an effort not an excuse"


Her dress whispered across the floor
As she danced around
Sending off looks in a humans eye
His gaze screams 'I want to talk to you'
She giggles and whispers
'One day maybe'
She dips to the floor in a pretzel
Curtsy
And he let out a sigh
He realizes that his dreams
Are becoming reality and feels
Fear washing over his entire body
Her sudden perfume could
Easily paralyze his fragile body
Like a mirror he crashed
To the floor in a million pieces
Sweeping them with her dress as she goes
He slowly gathers up his
Broken soul reflecting her beauty
From below a shadowy
Silhouette screams
Dark beauty


The author's comments:
My teacher and I wrote this. Thank you Mr. Balestrino

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Zeeny PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 25 2013 at 4:00 pm
Zeeny PLATINUM, Staten Island, New York
37 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"When someone truly cares about you, they make an effort not an excuse"

okay I will try better next time. 

on Jun. 25 2013 at 3:58 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1163 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you've still got a soul left to lose”
― Charles Bukowski

This is cool, I think it could have been better tho