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the stars laugh at me

the stars laugh at me
because I am alone
and because they cannot reach me



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paleteenagerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
today at 3:25 pm:
This is the seventh poem of yours I have read and I am falling deeper in love with your poems (and you). You are a lovely writer.
 
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MckayThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 30 at 3:08 pm:
The ending is one of your best in my opnion. Rather than saying that you can not reach you say they can't reach you. And dam* those stars for thinking they're superior than us...even though they're high in the heavens and see everything beneath them, things, people, and places we wished we could see. Maybe they are superior after all...
 
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