the stars laugh at me

April 25, 2013
By migwam ELITE, Tumwater, Washington
migwam ELITE, Tumwater, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"Never let the future disturb you. You will meet it, if you have to, with the same weapons of reason which today arm you against the present." --Marcus Aurelius


the stars laugh at me
because I am alone
and because they cannot reach me



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on May. 20 2013 at 3:25 pm
paleteenager PLATINUM, Fountain Hills, Arizona
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This is the seventh poem of yours I have read and I am falling deeper in love with your poems (and you). You are a lovely writer.

Mckay ELITE said...
on Apr. 30 2013 at 3:08 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do."
—Apple’s “Think Different” commercial, 1997
“Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn't understood.”
― Weihui Zhou

The ending is one of your best in my opnion. Rather than saying that you can not reach you say they can't reach you. And dam* those stars for thinking they're superior than us...even though they're high in the heavens and see everything beneath them, things, people, and places we wished we could see. Maybe they are superior after all...


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