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In the mirror

April 25, 2013
By Silent-change GOLD, Parow, Other
Silent-change GOLD, Parow, Other
13 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
I'd rather you tell me the truth and make me cry, than tell me a lie and make smile.


in the mirror i see
a reflection of me
a sketch of my face
not a wrinkle is out of place

i look for a feeling of happiness
but that feeling is amiss
i search for a true feeling
one that has an honest meaning

the only feeling that i see
is that sadness within me
the drooping of my eyes
the tear stains of my cries

the tremble of my lips
that feeling at my finger tips
the slow rise and fall of my chest
my breathing is shallow at its best

the beating of my heart
the pain tearing me apart
that is all that is reflected
i am no longer protected



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on Apr. 26 2013 at 3:32 pm
jackyvicious GOLD, Las Vegas, Nevada
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Masquerade the heart Is the height of haunting souls Just not what you seek of me Can the heart reveal the proof Like a mirror reveals the truth See the evil one is you Is that scary for you baby

i know the exact feeling but its a beautful peice

Redella SILVER said...
on Apr. 26 2013 at 8:33 am
Redella SILVER, Grand Rapids, Michigan
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I know those feelings. Nice work!

on Apr. 26 2013 at 4:21 am
Silent-change GOLD, Parow, Other
13 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
I'd rather you tell me the truth and make me cry, than tell me a lie and make smile.

It's pretty unique and honest

on Apr. 25 2013 at 8:17 pm
NewYorkLove BRONZE, Delray Beach, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"Imperfection is beauty. Madness is genius. And it's better to be absolutely ridiculous than absolutely boring."-Marilyn Monroe
"A girl should be two things: classy and fabulous."-Coco Chanel

This is so beautiful. I can totally relate xo.