The Feeling In My Bones

April 22, 2013
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I saw her turn into a ghost
and slowly flicker way

She whispered loud, but said not much
Before I watched her fade

The rain was humming on a seal
Drumming in my mind

The rhythm sparse, the logic gone
The purpose of it swayed


I felt a feeling in my bones
That didn't have a name

The strangest, re-occurring thought
An image in my brain

The ghost was calling out to me
In the blackest part of night

I went up to the doorway
But there wasn't one in sight





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HudaZavery said...
Jul. 10, 2014 at 10:32 am
Woah, absolutely amazing poem! The imagery, rhyme and suspense were all very effectively used
 
MaybeImCrazyButIThinkILovedYou This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 12, 2014 at 9:00 am
Thank you!
 
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