She is Beautiful

April 21, 2013
By jess14 BRONZE, New York, New York
jess14 BRONZE, New York, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"We accept the love we think we deserve"


She is beautiful
I hate the way people look at her
as If all that matters is that she is not
model thin
why cant people see
her beautiful almond blue eyes
or the freckles that dance around her nose
and her wavy brown hair
with flecks of the sun
why cant people look past her figure
and she the beautiful girl that I do
I only hope
that she sees it too



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LoveBeingMe said...
on May. 4 2013 at 7:04 pm
LoveBeingMe, Ridgetop, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
♥ ♥ I love being myself, and thinking positive of myself,


because I know who I am and I don't


try to be someone else. People try to bring me

down even though they don't know me or my personality.
But I know me ♥ ♥

Love it, you like described my bff

Mckay ELITE said...
on May. 3 2013 at 4:17 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do."
—Apple’s “Think Different” commercial, 1997
“Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn't understood.”
― Weihui Zhou

Jess, this is beautiful. Not to be cheesy. It really is. The message and the emotion you incoporate. A sort of sadness for the blindness society has for physical beauty. Did you mean see rather than "she" in the fourth to last line? Wasn't really sure. Otherwise, this is an excellent poem. 

on May. 3 2013 at 4:17 pm
Mr.packerbear12 SILVER, Minnesota Lake, Minnesota
5 articles 0 photos 105 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Judge lest not you be judged"

"Take the plank out of your own eye before the speck out of your brother's"

"live each day as if it's your last"

"God doesn't give you what you can handle, He helps you handle what you are given"

wo, very nice! way better than any of my poetry, very nice!

on May. 3 2013 at 4:14 pm
Snow-Angel BRONZE, NIne Mile Falls, Washington
1 article 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
What is Normal? Normal is a setting on a washing machine.
No one wants to be that!

That is wonderful!!!!!! I love it!

on Apr. 24 2013 at 7:44 pm
LexusMarie PLATINUM, Las Cruces, New Mexico
27 articles 0 photos 423 comments

Favorite Quote:
The more control you have over yourself, the less control others have over you.

Hey there, Jess! I love the title, how sweet. I love this, the simplicity is very nice. The concept is something very controversial and I love how you made something so serious, so nice. You say you wish you were able to rhyme because it makes a poem even more special.. I see that you made this poem special! Seriously, when someone can write a lovely poem without rhyming there is so much talent there. I wish I could write poems well without rhyming all the time. You did a great job. The meaning is wonderful and I wish more people saw it the way you do. Descriptions are wonderful.. clear and vivid! Great job!

on Apr. 23 2013 at 8:46 pm
Laugh-it-Out PLATINUM, Brooklyn, New York, New York
38 articles 0 photos 445 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Do not go gentle into that good night. Rage, rage against the dying of the light" --Dylan Thomas

I love it Jess, soooo pretty, for some reason, I thought about coco. I don't know, but for some reason I feel as though people only like her for her beauty. I mean I don't know her very wellbut whatever

on Apr. 23 2013 at 10:04 am
SunnyDreams BRONZE, Niger Falls, Other
1 article 0 photos 274 comments

Favorite Quote:
Can you feel what I have seen, when no one else has lived through what I have?-HalveOfLife

i luv this one its one  of the best...

on Apr. 23 2013 at 10:02 am
Apostolic-Girl SILVER, Athens, Ohio
7 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
...But there are still stars in the dark night sky...

Very nice... might need a little work though...


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